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voting

This house believes that young people should be allowed to vote at 16,five reasons why I disagree with the statement:

the children are being put under pressure whilst going through their GCSE’s .At their age they are still to easily influenced and are lead the same way as their parents.Its a slippery slope but its like changing the age of being classed as an adult from 18 to 16 it would practically be going against what the politicians stand for as they feel our GCSE’s are important. but now actually want us to focus on a vote for their own sake instead of ours.

On the other hand at the age of 16 you are legally allowed to have sexual intercourse which in some cases means that whilst a teenager you will also be a parent if teens are able to look after and take care of an actual baby surely it’s enough proof of them being responsible and able at that age to make important decisions.

 

debate preparation

I disagree with the statement “This house believes that space exploration is a waste of time and money”.World wide there are people suffering due to a lack of money which is the basis of buying materials and a daily meal etc. which may not be easy to change as it happens throughout the world however it can change slowly step by step.also advancements in the national health service and hospital research requires a large amount of money which could easily be funded from a single piece of say a space suit or rocket…machines that could be spent saving billions of lives for people who fight against such common diseases like cancer which has been killing many of people which like the lack of money will happen slowly over a period of time.time is also of the essence as producing something the size of multiple buses takes possibly years .

The graveyard book

To describe the image in five words: fatalities,uknown,darkness

why was the knife polished?what might it suggest this ?I think that the knife is polished because the killer(the man jack) wants to make a clean and sharp cut ,this may possibly suggest that the man jack is a stealthy and a well known assassin .

why do readers expect bad events to happen at night?

“his hair was dark and his eyes were dark and he wore black leather gloves of the thinnest lambskin.”

Copy out all sentences that describes the setting:”the toddlers room was at the very top off the house “,”silent on the carpeting “,”the real moon shone through the casement window”,”light was not bright,it was diffused by the mist “,”the cot”.

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Why are teenagers seen beasts to the public.

1)”short personal story ” teenagers I feel are seen as beasts to the public. Such as when two of my friends (both teenagers) entered a shop I tried to follow on inside but was told only two people at a time , I then saw three other adults walk in no problem. I feel that because of being a teenager was being treated like a beast.

2)” the way we act “the way we act is what first of all put us in the position of number limits. The majority of thefts on small corner shop are much to many(in the teen age range) which means when being outnumbered in shops are cautious.

3)” what can you do to change ” however though unlike my first paragraph I do feel that the way we act can determine the outcome for certain scenario. An anecdote that I know personally is by not reacting in a bad manner ended up not having to do the bad deed an example of how you act determines what the turn out is.

Teenagers are lazy monsters

I, Seydou, disagree with the statement “teenagers are lazy monsters”. I feel this way because it is out of their hands as youths (who at the time are likely to be going through puberty) uncontrollably behave in the manner that gives off their lazy monster impression. Furthermore, although I may not be a teenager, I still feel strongly about the issue and have an understanding of the challenges they face. The statement implies that teenagers (the so-called beasts) are lazy monsters although I feel that the majority are affected by the minority who wouldn’t like to be portrayed as having a monster-like persona.

I believe that saying teens are lazy is a misjudgment and has a negative impact. This means it could deeply affect the way they view, respect and treat adults as many look up to adults as role models. After being called lazy monsters over and over again, which would essentially be provoking the teens, they start to take on the role of behaving like lazy monsters (even though it’s not their true personality).

I think it is unfortunate that most teens are forced to go to bed early because they have difficult sleep patterns. Melatonin may affect everyone but the darkness hormone strikes teens harder than any other age range, due to the hours it kicks in. Adults produce the hormone at 10pm, teens on the other hand produce it at 1am with a three hour difference. The number may not sound incredibly large but actually affects them deeply as it has an outcome of many hours of sleep being lost. It means less focus towards education because of a natural process. View this scenario, so as you probably know the expected minimum of sleep is eight hours which is easily passed when sleeping at 1am. If of course the teen has the determination of going to school and getting there on time (also showing that them being ‘lazy’ not done on purpose) after waking up at eight which I highly doubt having only slept seven hours, they will then have only 45 minutes to eat, take a shower and then the journey to school etc. That’d be alright if the school starts late but could be difficult as many start at half past eight or earlier!

Moreover I disagree with teenager being viewed lazy, mainly because after a catastrophic morning they then must go through six lessons (depending on your school) after Only seven hours of sleep, with around two of those lessons being disliked as only being human not everyone enjoys all subjects. After some lessons comes an exhausting, energy wasting lesson which we all know is P.E taking place in the scorching heat which would be essentially be draining all your last ounces of energy meaning that for all your other lessons including the ones you may actually enjoy you’d be too worn out to even give it a shot and try so even if you were really looking forward to the subject you’d sleep right through it, because instead of looking forward to enjoying the lesson you’d be more focused on getting a few hours of sleep, even though you’d feel replenished after the lesson you will earned a detention (this will probably happen throughout different lessons until you are finally replenished) which is why I disagree with the statement that teenagers are lazy as they aren’t always trying to slouch off but are just feeling the toll and effect of being a few hours behind.

The teenagers of today are practically living the life of an adult or I think could possibly be even harder! I know it’s a bold claim however the adults get less challenging work and tasks to cope within the day on the contrary the teens (remember who are still developing) must go through things they have never ever seen or gone through (like put a polar bear in the desert) on top of that they then have their afternoon full with homework so again aren’t able to catch up with sleep. Which in my eyes is good that they’re being mentally pushed but I Still hold the case of it possibly being harder than the life of an adult. I Also know that melatonin is only a single hormone going through any and all teenagers body as many more circulate through them. Such as mood swings causing them to switch in an instant. They change from laughing to a full on rage in the blink of an eye, giving the impression of being metaphorical monster. However I still have the concept that calling a teenager a monster I think puts people down, just because of being in a certain age range, and that is the age range where you are most likely to learn and focus on the foundations of certain skills and knowledge but instead are being affected by a crude comment.

The metaphor of being a lazy monster, is highly amusing for me as the very thought of on your 13th birthday transforming into an apparent lazy monster. More to the point many with the slightest bit of common sense knows that there isn’t a sudden change when you turn 13 and when you turn 20 years old when you supposedly turn from a monster to a respected adult. Once being known as a lazy monster more and more people determined to try to prove everyone else wrong showing that the way they are acting isn’t done on purpose. l have this view because referring to them as what’s usually seen as a grotesque vile creature who usually causes irritation to others, can be effective to how they grow up and their livelihood. all of these reasons are why I disagree with the point teenagers are lazy monsters.

Another lost child

I think the tattoo ‘another lost child’ represents children suffering to the gang violence as when hearing the photographers life involved gangs. It’s a mix of metaphors and physical things. Physically because it may mean that the child has been killed and metaphorically as it could be simply being lost at making a decision of either living a gang free life or be with trouble.

I think he got the tattoo after being stabbed to show He suffered the loss of possibly a relative or someone close. It may also symbolise making a decision for as after being stabbed.. . If making it through the gang expect him back however he may feel like ending it there as realising when in hospital and spending time with the gang his life is always a risk and on the line.

 

Don’t call me a teenager

Hyperbole – over exaggerating

Sarcasm

“Simultaneously. Right, ok, I feel much better now ”

Changing tone – inserts her opinion – proves she can speak correctly

Full stops and commas help to show Sarcasm +tone.

The way Rebecca feels about being a teenager is that adults have a stereotypical view when they here the word teenager.

Emotive language has been used to help strengthen Rebecca grants argument as It shows that Not all teenager’s have the same features as the bad reputation teens