Dear RAF or to whom it may concern,
My name is Seydou Traore, i am a trustworthy Scientist in year 9 student attending the London nautical. This letter is me proposal a sale for the well being and knowledge of others. My hypothesis of this experiment is to test the rate of time in which a paper-made helicopter makes impact on the ground, and how the amount of paper clips added, adds to the weight hopefully affecting the time . The dependent variable in this scenario is the time that it takes and the independent is the amount of paper clips i put onto the helicopter, the two variables have a connection because if i change the amount of paper clips it affects the time that it takes. I feel that you would be interested in this matter because of its relativity to your organisation. You can relate it to the rate of which a real helicopter would fall to the ground or see the time that a shot down pilot would have to survive or even compare it to other aircraft’s. My accurate test could determine the speed of your real life aircraft’s and help many around the world with the questions on the matter, because of your largely well known organisation a lot of people will find it easily.to summarize its relativity can help the endangered which is why you think about funding my experiment. I thank you for your time and hope you look further into this proposal.
June 29, 2016 at 8:36 pm
Hello Seydou,
Thank you for publishing this to your student journal. I can see, however that you have been working on this for some time but you don’t appear to have made a lot of progress. I was available during todays lesson to support you and I have marked your first piece (which you should work on a little) so I hope you will take the opportunity to speak with me and conclude this section in tomorrows lesson.
Ms C
June 30, 2016 at 7:35 pm
I see progress here! Don’t give up!